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Tim Ryerson
Date: 3/8/2013 5:08:00 PM
I can identify well with this gem, Frank as I have broken His commandments many times (and still do, I'm afraid) 'Step lightly, on the scattered fragments'...wow...Also,you commented on my blog that your favorite poem was 'Little Boy Blue'...My dad sang opera and on long trips he would always sing that song to us...awesome and heartbreaking poem and song...Take care - Tim
Debra Squyres
Date: 3/6/2013 12:01:00 PM
Well this goes into my fav's !! Well written and thought provoking. So much hid from man's eyes ..though known by His ever knowing eyes. Good thing he forgives us...ehhh?? Enjoyed !!
Catie Lindsey
Date: 3/5/2013 6:09:00 PM
"To finally take you home??" No, no, I wont have it. You MUST stay around here for a long, long time to come. Thank you for the awesome comment on my poem. Love and hugs, Catie :)
Catie Lindsey
Date: 3/5/2013 6:10:00 PM
putting this one into my favs, Frank. Thanks! Hugs. :)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2013 12:12:00 AM
So frank, how many of the Oscar contenders have you seen? And do you want Argo to win now? I just can't decide!!! Probably Amour made the most impact on me and yet it's just so dark and not as enjoyable as Argo, Django or some of the others!!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2013 12:12:00 AM
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:03:00 PM
Life is full of trials...if we never have shortcomings, there would be no reason to humble ourselves before God! I like the way you ink!
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/28/2013 6:59:00 PM
Dear Frank....I may be presumptuous if I think I've already taken a look into your soul, (at least a little look)....and what I see is kind and generous, deeply commited to what is right, protective of the innocent and tender hearted, behind the remnants of a past that wasn't all your doing. I have smiled at what I've seen, and hope you know that you are a good friend to those who are not 'tired of your follies'. Your poem touched me again. :)
David Williams
Date: 1/28/2013 12:44:00 PM
Frank oh I love this heartfelt write, it hits so many chords, very well done...David
Becca Lucas
Date: 1/28/2013 12:11:00 PM
thank you, once again, for your sweet comments and your encouragement. You're awesome.
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/28/2013 1:11:00 AM
Such a powerful poem i so can relate too.Im sure apart from the purgatory and breaking the commandments which everyone do.yet not everyone is humble enough to admit.Im sure there is a huge part of heaven in that heart and soul too.This gem goes to.my fav and tnks a million for honouring my poems with such.beautiful comments Frank.Charma
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/27/2013 5:32:00 PM
by the way, your contest is next on my to do list. i am half done with the history challenge and there are not many left that I want to do now. Your song idea was so unique. Luv, Andrea
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/27/2013 5:31:00 PM
frank, just sopping by to give you a big HI!!!
Becca Lucas
Date: 1/24/2013 11:05:00 AM
Coming back to this one Frank... I love it because it's seems to be from your heart. I agree with Sharon and enn pee. I'm by your side, sir, as you've been by mine. hugs <3
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2013 10:51:00 PM
wow, this is a powerful one, honest and heartfelt. Love it, Frank.
sharon weimer
Date: 1/22/2013 1:18:00 PM
I know what they will find there. A generous heart, honest and brave. It seems your write your heart and soul in every poem dear Frank, and I do believe you have no idea how the person you are makes life that much better an brighter for all of us who know you. A joy to read you again. Keep writing sweet friend. Warm hugs, shar xoxo
binibining P.iNk
Date: 1/20/2013 9:25:00 AM
I think we catch glimpses of your soul through your poetry, Frank and it is a very fascinating one that has a glow... I think there would be people kneeling beside you -- guess who one of them would be? I hope that's not being intrusive if I did...Very touching write Frank and thank you for passing by my poem...
Anne Currin
Date: 1/17/2013 9:53:00 AM
I absolutely love the way you write, it truly speaks to my soul! This is a very beautiful poem, Frank!
harry horsman
Date: 1/17/2013 9:22:00 AM
like this Frank, so profound,and sincere...
Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 1/16/2013 3:04:00 PM
you're not up to your old trick of deleting poems again are you frank?! I seem to recall seeing this one before...if someone looked deep into your soul I'm sure they would discover someone with a naughty sense of humour but a good heart :)
Becca Lucas
Date: 1/16/2013 12:37:00 PM
There it is... :)