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footprints in the leaves revised

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footprints in the leaves revised

Running though the crackling leaves, no footprints are to be seen, but her laughter could  be heard all round.   She passes a deer with lovely doe eyes, when suddenly  a hand stretches out and grabs her.   Her heart misses a beat then whispers ."Why are you here?" 
" Is this where I live my fantasy?" He nods, not saying a word  slowly and gently he lies her iin the leaves. She soon realises that heaven was here on earth.

Panting with love she clutches the leaves as paradise is found ....... With smoking eyes, he kisses her goodbye.......Paradise lost.

The leaves no longer make her soul happy. Sighs, turns  the car's key and heads home

The forest floor
a bed of crushed leaves ...
the sound of laughter 

 

 


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  1. Date: 2/10/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Great fantasy winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/10/2013 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Sara ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/7/2013 10:48:00 AM
    Seren, Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/10/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda. you too enjoy your day...Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 11:09:00 AM
    Fantasy brings forth a passionate voice...love the story line and the great finish haiku. Congrats on your win !

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/10/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra ......Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:20:00 AM
    Hi there congratulations, this is a super piece well done on your winning spot xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Mandy....Seren
  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:35:00 AM
    lovely write..congrats on your win..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/6/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mehnaz ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 6:47:00 PM
    A wonderfully emotional write, thanks so much for the entry! Congrad's Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/5/2013 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Another win, you are on a roll. Great job Seren!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/5/2013 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard....Seren
  1. Date: 1/18/2013 9:50:00 AM
    awesome post with a beautiful haiku

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/19/2013 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charma ...... Seren
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 1/18/2013 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haiku ending i meant
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:34:00 PM
    I enjoyed seeing your story followed by haiku. the romantic topic is poignant. Indeed, where dreams are crushed!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Seren me likes, well done and good luck...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    smiles thanks David
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:04:00 AM
    Love it Sass, you dun well xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thx Mandy...Seren
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:24:00 AM
    Wow, now that is an immense and an intense write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and 'crushing' poem this morning! What a powerful piece, so very immaculate, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell...seren