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I AM ALIVE

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I AM ALIVE

I AM ALIVE!

Your mistake, my creation

In truth I am just speck  

Flowering obliviously in your gut

Does that mean distraction?

 

My heart now beats

And I bear fits filled with my future

Waiting to be unleashed to the world unknown,

With my eyes wide shut

I imagine you to try and picture you

I hear you speak, I hear you laugh

Isn’t that the perfect lullaby?

 

My legs kick hard but you try to hide:

One night’s extravaganza

All under your T-shirt

Like it’s all in a day’s work 

Don’t you want me mommy?

  

I am the gift you never asked for  

But then life is to die for.

How I wish to write to Santa,

Have him deem my innocence

Before he awards me with my gift

I get life for Christmas? 

Afford me the chance to be!

I am alive I breath through you.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:10:00 AM
    Hey neighbour, congrats on you getting a honourable mention there!!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:30:00 PM
    Great topic chosen about which to write your winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats on your placement..Sara

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 1:07:00 AM
    congrats. (:c Jenish

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Ronny, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:03:00 AM
    This definitely speaks out the voice of romance..beautiful!and tnks for reading my poem.

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 12:59:00 AM
    just beautiful..i love it....amazing write ''How I wish to write to Santa, Have him deem my innocence Before he awards me with my gift I get life for Christmas? '' Afford me the chance to be! I am alive I breath through you.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:25:00 PM
    What a beautiful poem, makes me wish those consideering abortion could read it. Life is so precious and really a miracle. Love it Ronny!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:47:00 PM
    this is really great, telling it from the baby's point of view. I greatly enjoyed reading this one.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Some real great lines - "Life is to die for," "I get life for Christmas." More. Thanks for reading my stuff. daver

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:58:00 AM
    "....then life is to die for." -> well said ! - I am glad that you are here Ronny. - A very good poem you have posted. - Just want to say ...... I stopped believing in Santa Claus. - Have a nice day. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:05:00 AM
    this is amazing...I love this so much

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    Date: 1/16/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanx i am glad