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Guns

Guns are safe, trigger finger shoots to thrill

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:29:00 PM
    Good write!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:21:00 PM
    congrats on your win Seren

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 4:28:00 PM
    hey, I think I never saw this one before. Congratulations, Seren. I love the last part using similar sounding word thrill in place of kill.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your grand win friend Seren, Cheers!! (^_^)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Maria
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Seren.Love it.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Kash thank you
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Hi girl big congratulations on your no 1 xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy.....
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts, congrad's Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanking you Debbie
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Powerful Monoku. Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Connie thanks
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 11:01:00 PM
    Many congrats Seren for this well deserved win

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/26/2013 1:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tahera both for the comment and for stopping by .....Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 9:30:00 PM
    Super nice Seren! Congratulations on your win. Yes, a gun is just a tool, but some people will never master their proper use. RAY

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/25/2013 9:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    One day maybe Ray..Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:59:00 PM
    Seren, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/25/2013 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda .. Seren
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:48:00 PM
    Seren,,,such a loaded monoku if there ever was one! Nice work on this entry...u expressed the emotion that I was looking for so very well! I was interested to read what other poets tho't of this one! :) gwendolen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/25/2013 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Gwendolen ...Seren
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 4:38:00 AM
    Ah yeah this is right

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 2/20/2013 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 3:01:00 AM
    yes true, it's not the gun but the trigger so right .............xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/18/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes Mandy thats right
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:28:00 PM
    tell that to the kid that shot his brother.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/17/2013 12:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dont know what to say, wouldnt know what to say...Seren
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:54:00 AM
    and sadly Seren with that word that rhymes with thrill "Kill " a good poem is this... gives the mind the urge to think...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/17/2013 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    not the gun that kills Harry its the finger that pulls the trigger
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I wrote it as kill but then altered it to thrill