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Petals In The Wind

I sent you some petals in a letter
Oh let them fly away
Hear them sing of my love
As they caress the gentle wind
See them dance above your head
Heady with love they carry
Taste the sweetness from them
As they kiss your lips 
Smell their erotic perfume
As they glide across the gale
Oh feel, feel the love in your heart
As my petals swirl in the wind.
16/01/13

By Tahera Mannan

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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this little poem. Very well written.

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 2:52:00 AM

    This is a lovely romantic write with a soft and smooth flow to it Tahera, many congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 10:54:00 PM

    Hi Tahera, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:52:00 PM

    wow,I love how you made yours so romantic, sweetie. This is very pretty. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 1:12:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Tahera, sorry it's a bit late xx

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:02:00 PM

    So beautiful it reads like a song, Tahera. I pray you are doing well. Just thought I'd come read your latest! Love you, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 7:17:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your very expressive work...Great winning entry..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 7:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win!! :)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:00:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:39:00 AM

    awwwweee...this is just tooo sweet. What a lovely idea...if only I had a love to send them too. Enjoyed your poem and wishing you congratulations on your winning place in the contest. I'll not forget this one. ...

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:28:00 AM

    congratulations on ur win...:)))

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 3:00:00 AM

    VERY romantic and eloquent...congratulations are DEFINITELY in order - Tim

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Tahera, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:21:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win, Tahera. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 2:51:00 PM

    Congratulations, Tahera. Su

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 12:03:00 PM

    congrats on your win Tahera

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Very sweet romantic piece.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:40:00 AM

    ‡ Wow, This Is Sooo Very Sensual As Absolutely Beautiful! ˜ Hear Them Sing These Petals In The Whispering Winds Of Her Beautiful Love, Sweet Beautiful Tahera ˜ I Am Going To Favour This Perfumed Bouquet In Beauty's Vase And Thank You, For Blessing My Heart With Your Radiant Treasures Lovely Visit ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 5:45:00 AM

    good one Tahera, hopefully you inspired me to write one..can't think of anything so nice..