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Death becomes me

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Death becomes me

Hand in hand, 
In this forbidden land.

A shadow so intense, 
I take offence. 

Gripping me, I severely thrust,
A violent rush. Who can I trust? 

I awaken to a voice or two,
Now met with my vision renewed. 

Shivers now take me to an unfamiliar place,
Where these silhouettes I now have to face.

My subconscious has known the answer,
Urgently summoning my intruder.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:39:00 PM
    Vivid imagery throughout, or resolving conflict at the end? Maybe revelation more than resolution. I will clear my mind and read it over, maybe a few times. I like the poem, thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 8:46:00 AM
    wonderful write Dark Mistress,lovely

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    Date: 1/18/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard Palmer. Glad you enjoyed your read. :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:44:00 PM
    D Mistress, another wonderful couplet.... deep with dark passion... and wow... to the summoned intruder... how rude of death approaching without the welcome... call my crazy but i super love this and the awakening gripping image... always~ LINDA

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    Date: 1/18/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Deep dark passion, best combo, for my style of writing. ;)
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:48:00 AM
    An interesting and very well written poem, I like it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 1/18/2013 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne-Lise. Happy you enjoyed it! Shall try to keep up the good writing. ;)