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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 12:51:00 PM

    One of the best 'writers block' poems I have ever read! So direct... so simple. It's 'simply' brilliant!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:05:00 PM

    So nice to read your write this evening. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:40:00 AM

    I agree with Linda! Very straight forward, but with emotion that I can tell comes deep from within. Lovely poem :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:22:00 AM

    a straight forward analogy Jancari .. emphatically stated and written with unique emotion from deep within luv ..

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:55:00 AM

    ?How the muses tease us so!! But look how fabulous you courted her!! Well done Jancarl !! Big Hugss. Keep that pen moving...deb

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:43:00 AM

    OW Yeah i ve been there many times and it is so sad when it happenS ..keep writing ..Just let your soul find your heart..CHARMA

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:20:00 PM

    Hoping you see more than a tree now... take care.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:56:00 AM

    don't call on the muse Jancarl she will come knocking on your door, she does not desert those that love her so do not worry .xx

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Oh no!!!The muse will return..You will see a scene, hear a song, read a line, hear a news report and there will be that line for the next poem..Enjoyed reading..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:41:00 AM

    i like this little wonder....

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:16:00 PM

    I like this. I wonder if your meant to say "Dear" not "Dead" doctor in the first stanza. It DID grab my attention. The irony of the poem for me is that a "normal" person might seek a doctor if they looked at a tree and saw something else, whereas an artist would do the opposite...nicely done.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:13:00 PM

    Sometimes loss takes away the color. I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you'll see a tree as much more than just a tree soon... a part of God's creation... a place for shade... a home for animals... a place for children to climb..... don't stop looking!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:07:00 PM

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