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I Wish

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I Wish

I wish I could be by your side, without you knowing. I wish I could be the wind that touched you, without you seeing me. I wish I was close to your heart and there you could feel me. I wish I was water and you could drink me and go inside of you, without you knowing. I wish I was the sun that comes through your window, every morning and wake you up with a caress and a kiss on your face. I wish I was the wind that forms a hurricane and take you with me, real far away. I wish I was a bird of a very special kind and be able to fly and be by your side. All these things, I wish to be, but they are fantasies that can not be. I wish I knew, if deep in your mind, you still remember me from time to time, or you forgot me little by little as time went by...
Copyright: For fantasy contest Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:39:00 AM
    lovely and emotional words of love and devotion. the reader can feel the sentiment and caring in each line. nice job

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:02:00 PM
    Lucilla, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. A very creative write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Touching and sad. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Enjoyed the read once more...and congratulations on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Oh my goodness, this is beautiful and so full of yearning. Really enjoyed reading this one! Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:23:00 AM
    I love this romantic wishful poem. An excellent write. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:48:00 PM
    A wonderfully romantic write is this one, Lucilla,!! Jag

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Ahh!!The romantic heart has written some great passion into this work...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your stop by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Ah a true to life fantasy! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 10:09:00 AM
    I have chills!! This is absolutely breath taking! I am adding it to my favorites. The flow is perfect, and IMAGERY- wow! A stunning write you have here :)

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 9:35:00 AM
    A fantastic fantacy. I like it. I wish you a win in the contest. Thanks for your appreciation of my Tanka Kiss of Death, Lucilla. I am grateful. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Hi Lucilla great fantasy write, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Hi Lucy, a hard feeling not knowing if you still exist in the mind of the one who still rains upon your stars.... a very lovely and sad feeling... good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Beautiful fantasies! Lovely, Lucilla. Enjoyed! Good luck :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:55:00 PM
    wonderful poem for the fantasy contest. Wish I had thought of this!!!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Romantic wishes and dreams Lucilla. - Beautiful poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:00:00 AM
    To be smitten is lovely, till it leaves your life. Tender heartfelt words you have penned here.

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