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About This Poem

YOU

You touch my heart
You touch my soul
You are the one
I’m waiting for

You are the wind
And mystic wave
You are my hero
You are so brave

You are the moon
On big dark sky
You are the star
Shinning up high

You are the sun
On a sunny day
You are my love 
What can I say

You are the rain
With golden drops
My destiny
And all my hopes

Please take my heart
And take my soul
You are the one
I’m waiting for

Believe me dear
Hope you can see
How much you mean
You mean to me

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Really enjoyed the rythm n simplicity

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 11:17:00 PM

    This poem is very well-written, Using very simple words, Following a wise rhyme scheme, You are a poet, Whom I admire, I just envy your man. mvvenkataraman

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 9:22:00 PM

    ‡ This Is Sooo Very Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth ˜ Tis A Love Song My Own Heart Need Brush ˜ A Kiss For My Beautiful Love ˜ I Shall Favour This Treasure Sweet As Blessed, Whom Holds Your Love ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Skiba Avatar Elizabeth Skiba Date: 1/15/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rachel, Thank you for kind words, your comment means a lot to me With love Ellie