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Aleurun

In an old attic stood a mirror covered in dust from countless years. And carved into its wooden frame was the strangest thing…it was my name. Taking a rag that I found near by, I wiped the mirror and wondered why. Why would a mirror that’s not my own have only my name, and that alone. The mirror reflected not the room, but a strange and ancient moonlit tomb. And carved upon one marble wall words that held me in their thrall. “When one who comes and knows the way, through the dark where time holds sway. Tis only then the mirror will show a land and love from long ago.” It seemed I knew just what to do, as on the mirror I gently blew. And wrote one word, yes only one I wrote the word Aleurun. The mirror became a stormy sea And reaching out, I made my plea. “Where once I was, now once again. Where once time stopped, let time begin.” And stepping through that darkling glass, I stood upon a meadows grass. While in the distance towers grew, to touch a sky of cobalt blue. “My love,” I heard a deep voice say. "This time I hope you’ll want to stay." And turning whispered “Aleurun.” I think our stories just begun.
For the contest "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY "

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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:23:00 AM

    Had me from beginning to end which turned out to be the beginning. I can't wait to read the sequel.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Linda, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Oh..just beautiful! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:28:00 PM

    Congrats on you big win Linda. I enjoyed reading your magical poem, Connie

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Congratulations! You drew me in completely with your wonderful rhythm and your awesome storytelling!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:45:00 PM

    You pulled me into the room, through the mirror and into the meadow .... Wow !! What a lovely fantasy !! Love the ending ! Congrats on your worthy win !!

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 6:11:00 PM

    T.R.E.M.E.N.D.O.U.S. write. Congratulations on the win! I'm putting it in my favorites...