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Petals In The Wind

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Petals In The Wind

Petals In The Wind A place sadly stands here bare and still Of flowers that once bloomed at their will Seeds that once kissed the magic of sunshine That created a beautiful bouquet that we can no longer find The days have been calm without even a breeze Life planted on the ground has become a saddened memory The quietness brings on an eerie feel What happened to the beauty that felt surreal? Suddenly, the wind began to arrive in the middle of the day Along with its air it brought petals along the way Petals that used to have a space to bloom A place where they could spread their luxurious perfumes One by one, all the flowers began to form In the yard where they were always kept safe and warm The wind then began to die down Seeing that its only reason was to pass the flowers back around Now the place where it all once was bare Has a beautiful bouquet that was born to be there So never will another wind sweep them away From the place that God so planted for them to stay

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  1. Date: 1/23/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Very pretty poem Gail ;} have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 2:28:00 PM

    A wonderful poem. I can imagine the petals of many colors and shapes blowing to a place where God created a beautiful bouquet forever to stay. If this is for a contest it sounds like a win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 11:14:00 PM

    this is beautiful, Gail. A good topic for a contest. soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:34:00 PM

    We have to keep hope! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:08:00 PM

    I saw a glimmer of this poem to come within your previous poem...you mentioned the flower battling the wind in order for the bloom to come and survive! This is a beautiful rendition from that piece my friend! I am enamored by this endearing poem, fantastic piece, Great Work!!