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Do You Remember

Do you remember the force of my biceps 
holding on hard to muscle it, helping me
tumble into a future of sorts. I made the 
darkness as well as the light spilling from 
water falls or just an old Starbucks cup.
There has been only a bit of spillage, 
time against time that pits my speed.

Do you remember the city, the highway, 
the apartments that ravage the wealth and 
poverty, we made it into suburbs piped on the 
tips of dreams. Tomorrow is but an appetizer 
primed before the buffet. We skip the past as
well as we can and fly, few allegiances attached.

Do you remember I never heard back from 
the one who left me peacefully while I slept, 
those promises turned into a black ladle 
of old fish soup... then I guess nothing is ever 
boring for those with two cents to rattle it in, 
I'll still stand up for you as a priest balancing 
all those threads together.

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:02:00 PM

    Julie' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:33:00 AM

    sorry i am late with congratulations Julie , very unintentional xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:14:00 PM

    this is great poetry. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Congratulations...Seren

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:27:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:19:00 AM

    Julie~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:06:00 AM

    I especially love the second verse and the imagery of "suburbs piped on the tips of dreams." This is such a different, interesting write. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win, Julie.