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Vacuum Cleaner

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Vacuum Cleaner

Red furry vacuum silently goes across the floor
Consuming dropped homemade southern biscuit
Then looks up with sad eyes beggin'  for more
  

Just for fun!!

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:15:00 AM

    like it Sara. My vacuum is being starved in the closet. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 8:48:00 PM

    cute ;} have a great day Sara,,,your name always reminds me of "Sera's Smile by Hall n Oats,,, you can watch it on utube ;}

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 3:27:00 AM

    Very sweet and original!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:08:00 PM

    I know people who would act the same way if a delicious biscuit fell on the floor. Good three lines.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:17:00 PM

    Ha ha, this is quite the humorous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:47:00 PM

    i like it! great comparison...

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:36:00 PM

    hmmm, to me, I am thinking you are describing a pet dog?? Hope I guessed right! very cute idea.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:32:00 PM

    Sara, what a cute post. I have 2 such vacuums.. They can stare a hole thru you... hehehe.......l Jake

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 12:39:00 PM

    How adorable! Lovely write, Sara. Must drop more of those southern biscuits! ;)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 11:49:00 AM

    hehehehehe...i could picture that sad looking vacuum cleaner...power of ur words...:)))

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:50:00 AM

    Well, it was fun, Sara! Terry (Unfortunately, mine gets 'fed up' pretty quickly...)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Brought a chuckle and a big smile...what a fun write !!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:42:00 AM

    Yes......sad eyes... but cute, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:16:00 AM

    lol, a sad little Princess : ) l had a chuckle here