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The Muse Has Gone

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The Muse Has Gone

I think I may write, but of what I am not sure
It could a be a love verse or one not so pure
I think I would like to write a verse on love and life
But it gets so hard and can be full of such strife

What can I write for this new one-to-one
My thoughts are dried up, and now they are gone
The muse she has left me, what am I to do?
I will just send these lines, as they are now to you.

Please do not judge me, if I get it wrong
But this is a breeze, I may now write a song
A song of love or a song on what will be will be?
Come muse I beg, send a new thought down to me.

No I am not there yet, I can’t think of a new one
So I give up on this piece that was for the one-to-one.
I will do the next one when I know what to say
So this is the end of it, I will send this one your way.

© 13/01/2013

Contest Entry One To One

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  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Lol there your humor I love. Congrats on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:29:00 PM

    Mandy, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Even without your muse, you can write an awesome poem! Well done - congrats :)

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 10:31:00 PM

    Boy l think we have all been there! Congrats on your win Mandy!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:17:00 PM

    What do you do when your Muse is not amused? Nice write!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 2:59:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 2:45:00 PM

    Very skillful write,Mandy...Lovely piece...Congrats on your well deserved win in this interesting contest...Thumb up for you,friend...

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:02:00 PM

    You sent it, and it was a winner!! Congratulations, Mandy!! great job!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:45:00 PM

    This made me smile. I blank page did it .... Congratulations on your win, Mandy. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:12:00 PM

    Mandy congratulations on your placement, I am glad you sent this my way, I enjoyed picturing you as you wrote it, well done...David

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:47:00 AM

    one to one, real tough....great write and congrats Mandy........Mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:47:00 AM

    no muse yet the power of your pen veraciously still.....

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:21:00 AM

    I like this one. My muse has left me on occasion, but has returned. Have no fear, my dear friend; you rmuse will return. Jancarl

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 2:51:00 AM

    Poorer by one poet Muse will be If you let it go! Excellent work!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:51:00 PM

    The lack of muse amuses, though at times, the lack is not funny at all. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:39:00 PM

    There are a couple of things which will help with writing in meter, most of the forms we are using..use iambic meter all this means is there is and [unstressed {syllable} & a STRESSED {syllable}] so 1 syllables words are obviuosly easier to figure out & usually it is the noun that is emphasized [the CAT] unstressed STRESSED. [unstressed/STRESSED = 1 iamb =metrical foot] [the CAT]

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/14/2013 2:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    [the RAIN][ in SPAIN] [falls MAIN][ly ON] [the PLAIN]..it has to sound like a clock tick/TOCK, tick/TOCK, tick/TOCK, tick/TOCK, tick/TOCK...so if you can't sing the rain in spain to your line it's probably not iambic meter :)