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When am I going to be error free

Toquyen Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell - LIFETIME Premium Member Toquyen Harrell - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled When am I going to be error free which was written by poet Toquyen Harrell. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When am I going to be error free

God I constantly do wrong things
Think the wrong thoughts
Wrong ways
When am I ever going to be mistake proof?
You are going to be so busy with me
So be warned
I just don’t know why I keep thinking the wrong thing
Wrong way of every subject that there is
And you keep correcting me
Aren’t you getting tired God?

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  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:59:00 PM
    He never gets tired of Loving you. I enjoyed your poem.

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 1/16/2013 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Richard :) Love ya, Toquyen
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:55:00 PM
    I like this one too. it shows you are caring about God because he has such a hard job with us all!

    Harrell Avatar Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 1/14/2013 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Andrea. Yes, He does, lol. Love ya, Toquyen