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let's not rush these things, my love

you never know...
these  breaths we breathe
may be our  last
so let's linger over
this goodbye kiss and hold fast
a while more
no cursory peck barely
finding its mark
no air embrace
leaving no scent
no, let us linger over this kiss
and hold fast a while longer
these breaths we breathe
may be our last...
we  never know

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 4:33:00 AM

    Very true. Lovers should not be in a haste to part except for a sad reason. nice pieces. thanks for your comment on my first poem.