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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:21:00 PM
    Nostalgic, tender, beautiful.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:55:00 AM
    this is wonderful

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:01:00 PM
    David' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Congratulation !!!!! my brilliant poet <3 <3 <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:28:00 PM
    wow this is so heartfelt.. enjoyed your write so much dear poet David :) thank you so very much for every supports ..appreciate so much :) Hugs <3 Sk

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  1. Date: 1/19/2013 12:59:00 PM
    Awesome and touching write will forever hold those memories close to your heart. Hugs

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    Date: 1/19/2013 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your wonderful win!
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:30:00 AM
    sorry i am late with congratulations david , very unintentional i assure you xx

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 10:50:00 AM
    A beautiful memory... Must have been very dear to you... It shows in your writting.

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 12:46:00 AM
    Wonderfully portrayed.... Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:10:00 PM
    oh my, I remember this one. I think I saw it at PFT and this is first time seeing it at Soup. one of your very best, David. Congrats on a very well deserved win.

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Congratulations David.....Nice words....Seren

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Odd how some people affect us this way common with a distant parent but I have been this close to elderly friends too. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 2:18:00 PM
    David, I love how you put life on paper and share such wonderful memories!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:40:00 AM
    This is so beautiful. My favourite part is "The clock needs winding…time stands still."

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:19:00 AM
    Is it about your father? I like it though its sad..Congratulations my friend David on your win!! cheers!! Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:18:00 AM
    Good morning David, wow i feel the longing in your free verse poem. sad when certain rolemodles are taken away suddenly. You were young & looking up to him.. I am sure in your heart you still do... because them mmeories are the ones no one will ever take from us...... ~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~Tex

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:58:00 AM
    This is beautifully sad, David. A flawless tribute to a lost father, or perhaps grandfather. I'm adding this one to my favourites. Congratulations on a wonderful win.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:30:00 AM
    A very touching poem, David. Congratulations on your win. Love, Su