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In Dawn's Bright Glow

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In Dawn's Bright Glow

The sweet notes of a bird drift down to me from one grand oak that shines with day’s first rays. I look up at blue sky and that old tree. What joy, for at a glad lark I now gaze! The lark sings on. Her song fills up my heart. I turn to see a deer whose head is bent to drink at a cool stream; the view is art. . . Sun’s beams, the deer and lark from God were sent to cheer me at this time. My eyes are drawn to fields far off and near them - hills that gleam in that gold stream of light, the blaze of dawn! My thoughts now waft as if they were a dream. This day of bliss I wish to keep - and so - I sit to write of it in dawn’s bright glow. Written 1/13/13 For the One to One contest of David Williams (if only it were really this nice and sunny today!)

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  1. Date: 5/4/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Only a woman could write so prettily, so appealingly. The Queen of Sonnets strikes again. - Red

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Andrea yes this art of words written within your poem. Congratulations for your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 9:28:00 PM

    Andrea, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:58:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea. You should know that it was 80 degrees here today and last nights low was 59. Wild weather in Texas. You may remember my "Golden Meadow Smile" from February 2010 when it was quite the opposite. Anyway, enjoyed the read. RAY

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:52:00 PM

    Nicely done on this wonderful sonnet. Makes me wish for spring. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Big Congrats Andy!!! you walk us right in the middle of where you are...Well done!! big huggs...love ya bunches, deb

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:51:00 AM

    Oh my goodness, how did I miss this one?? I cannot believe you wrote such a gorgeous sonnet using only one-syllable words!! Congrats on an awesome win :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:56:00 AM

    Beautiful write Andrea! The joys of bliss - oh if we could only with them never part. Congrats on your win! Well done!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 10:27:00 PM

    Congrats on win Andrea, knew l would see this in the winners circle.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 3:03:00 PM

    wonderful write ...congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 2:40:00 PM

    Lovely write,my friend..Good to see you on the winners circle...Congrats on your super win in this contest...

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:00:00 PM

    This is a beauty.....much lighter in subject than my own...beautifully done, Andrea! (I should have kept to a happier theme perhaps?) LOL !!

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:40:00 PM

    Beautiful sonnet. You do them very well, Andrea :-)... Congratulations on your win. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Andrea congratulations on your placement, this is a beautiful picture, and when I am out fishing all on my own I can listen to the Larks till the cows come home...David

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:55:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery and beautifully written. I am sure this will do well in the contest.

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/26/2013 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Check soup mail Andrea.
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:46:00 AM

    I close my eyes and I am with you in that beautiful dawn. I'm still not writing, i seem to have dried up. but I still visit to read some of the excellent work on the site. Love and best wishes, Margaret

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:36:00 PM

    well I could picture the beautiful sunny day , great imagery Andrea, best of luck in the contest with this stunning sonnet

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 1:44:00 AM

    what a brilliant write Andy , I see the winner here xx

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:23:00 AM

    A serene and beautiful picture created and flowing poetry....enjoyed reading it...thanks for the sweet comments dear...they mean a lot to me.....<3

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:35:00 PM

    Such a serene way to start the day. Naturally awsome. :)

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:31:00 AM

    I'll bet your initials and those of your boyfriend are carved on that old oak. Enjoyed mucho, Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 7:07:00 PM

    What a beautiful and peaceful poem. It really sets forth the wonders of God's creation. Wishing you sunshine.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:27:00 PM

    Another marvel of a Sonnet! Like your painting with words! Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Well written work that should do well in David's contest..Good luck ...It is still being cloudy here but we did have some sun today..I have spring flowers and trees that flower to start blooming..Thanks for stopping by..The dog that was my vacuum was actually Doris' dog..I had given Princess a bone so she was occupied...Sara

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:32:00 PM

    Andrea; This is so beautiful. I can just close my eyes and picture it, beautiful and relaxing. God bless. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:27:00 PM

    well this has brightened up my page I must say Andrea.." I think I will put it to the side of my dresser as a night-light..LOL..(so good to read)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 2:02:00 PM

    An amazing write drawing a vivid scenario of a day of bliss. Stunning! Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu Love. I have just returned from Islamabad to Karachi after attending a Two Day International Conference of Writers and Intellectuals organized by the Pakistan Academy of Letters. I'll soon place some photos of the Conference on my face book. I have already accepted your Friend Request. I'll do so again or initiate a Friend Request myself. Love

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 9:46:00 AM

    Lovely! Very much enjoyed the read. Sorry I'm a little late but thanks for the placement. Good contest! -- Sean

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:58:00 AM

    Such a picturesque piece, that rolls lightly from the tongue to lift a very pretty poem.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Yeah, it's raining here too Andrea, I wish we had the sunlight of which you spoke of! This is a perfect entry into David's contest, I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!

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