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Love Bomb

I will soon drop a bomb into your lovers hideaway
You will feel my passion exploding within your very soul
His defenses will never separate you from my love


First attempt at a Sijo.

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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 3:10:00 PM

    Very drastic move on your part..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:42:00 AM

    Wow! Love this great Sijo! Congratulations on your fantastic win my dear poet friend Richard! love/hugs,Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:57:00 PM

    Richard...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on another win! Well deserved. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:02:00 PM

    WHOA!! How did I ever miss this one!! BIG congrats on this. It's explosive!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:22:00 PM

    Well- you did an excellent job! You motivate me to try all of the forms I have yet to try... there are many! Nicely done, Rick :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/14/2013 1:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I had a little direction from Yanny so I can't take all the credit. We can all use a little help from our friends. Have a great day Anne.
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 8:14:00 AM

    Wish I had written that! Cheers!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/14/2013 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Jack.
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:40:00 PM

    Yeap even better :D I really enjoyed it for twice :D

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yanny!
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 8:36:00 PM

    Soupmail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    On my way.
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 8:16:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this short poem.(: Good work and I will definitely read more later.((:

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Great sijo Richard :D and strong love bombs :D - hug, yanny

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yanny, not sure if I have done this form correctly.
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:47:00 PM

    love this powrrful sijo, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:30:00 PM

    Very lovely and well done Richard! love,Deb

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Deb, I appreciate the visit and always happy for some love.
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:00:00 PM

    Richard great first attempt....David

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David.