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About This Poem

Tonight's Sunset

That splash of pink
   in the sky
persistantly
   draws my eye.
The setting sun,
   the waning day,
daylight quickly
   slides away.
A last gift
   before it goes,
the pastel mural
   the sky now shows.





see "about this poem" for the inspiration for this poem

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:00:00 AM

    It's at times like these I wish I was one of those people that always carry a camera with them. At the very least there is poetry... lol. Delightful little piece... I enjoyed it's easy-going-ness... and thanks for reading my haiku this morning. It was much appreciated :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:41:00 PM

    Saw the picture that went with it this time. Sure do like this poem seeing it again.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:06:00 PM

    truly beautiful write here, Francine

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:28:00 PM

    very lovely, francine, and wonderful use of rhyme!

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:16:00 PM

    Wish I could have seen that sunset!...Beautiful poem, Francine - Tim

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:37:00 AM

    An amazing sunset you have painted here Francine!Lovely read.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:14:00 AM

    this is a lovely visual poem, Francine, enjoyed...

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:48:00 AM

    oh how lovely it sounds ! Well done Francine...love,Deb

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:31:00 PM

    I wish I had seen it as well. How wonderful, Francine.