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Below is the poem entitled Valentine which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Valentine

   

     Heart breaking with its longing for you 
       with ears waiting for your whispers
           Arms aching to enfold you in 
                 a clean smell of love
                   Lips all of a tingle
                       Eyes ashine
                              B
                              E
                       .x
                              M
                              Y
                                       x
                      VALENTINE
             For the rest of our lives
       

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  1. Date: 1/15/2013 3:03:00 PM
    A wonderful sweet write Seren....congrats on your win! Hugs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/16/2013 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia, much appreciated
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:34:00 AM
    good thoughts and congratulations on this well deserving win....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mehnaz thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:16:00 AM
    catching up, Seren, congrats for this deserved no 1

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/15/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry I appreciate your comment....Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:54:00 PM
    Congrats! ~SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat........Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Seren, . ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi PD many thx for your congrats.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Wonderful poem. I'll toast to that

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cheers Jon ......Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Excellent piece,Seren...Congrats on your super win...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much ......Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Nice use of form! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Debbie
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:49:00 PM
    This is a well worthy winner luv, she didn't like mine at all lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 12:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Mandy you are a brilliant poet... Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Congrats Seren on your placement and thank you for joining my contest xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose.....Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Very cool and well done. Thanks for the sip of sweet love.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thank you Richard.... Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Seren, I toast to your poem with glass--well done!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig, thanks for your help ...Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:42:00 AM
    Love this, congrats :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:24:00 AM
    Nice shape. I like the little ekses.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my kisses awwww thanks Isaiah .....Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Those are not so easy to do..Enjoyed reading this early Valentine..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara......i enjoyed using the shape form...Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:34:00 AM
    What fun. Beautifully laid out. And thank you for your kind comments, Charles.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my pleasure Charles, thanks for stopping by....Seren
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Seren shucks ok....David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha Shucks back......seren
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:14:00 PM
    Wow Seren, you sold me, would be happy to be your Valentine. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwww Rollo, you would, wow it worked....Seren
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Such a lovely valentine !!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debra ....Seren
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:56:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful and gorgeous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, you have painted a remarkable poem here, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/12/2013 9:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell .....Seren