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When We Met ---

When we met, I instantly recognized you
Nothing in the world, could have been more true
Than the smile in your eyes

Your embrace enfolded my quivering frame
I gladly accepted the offer to take your name
My heart shouted and still cries

Together we will forge an idyllic future
Our past memories will no longer torture
Reaching to golden new highs

2013-01-12

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  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:17:00 AM

    This poem flows beautifully.How hopeful each word in new tomorrows.Very romantic.

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:22:00 PM

    this is a lovely telling of your love story. I especially liked the first stanza!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 1:50:00 PM

    Suzette a romantic poem brings back memories of our early days of youth carefree and sooooo in love. Although we're still in love after 44 years, it's a different kind of love. warm S,lies, Connie

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 1/15/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Second time round, this marriage is more authentic and I can verbalize it. (The previous marriage lasted 33 years but was built on shaky foundations).
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:01:00 PM

    NICE! enjoyed reading your wonderful poem

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:35:00 PM

    Great work..These are not so easy to write..Excellent topic about which to pen some lines..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Soup mail..Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 2:27:00 PM

    ahhhh that quiver...I remember it well. So many years ago now...Enjoyed this romantic poem !! Great write !!