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Night Sea

On this troubled, moonless night, I stand awestruck before her
For somewhere beneath the foam and froth of nature's mighty daughter;
Somewhere in brooding, forbidden waters lies my destiny...

1/12/2013
Rick's contest

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Hi my greatest Poet Tim... I love to read your poems.. and stopping here to wish you a Very Happy Valentine :)luv and hugs !!! <3 Sk

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 10:02:00 AM

    !!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:24:00 AM

    I like the depth of this winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 7:45:00 PM

    Ha, Love the Texas Outlaw Name... makes me want to write a poem about the DEW'S... by the way, loving this one again & again.... always the Texas She-Tasmanian Poet.. <--- LOL

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Sea - the mighty daughter of nature; very nice discription! congrats.

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 5:50:00 AM

    Well done Tim congrats...Seren

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:13:00 AM

    Awesome Sijo! Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Tim! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:09:00 PM

    Hi Tim, your work is always so uplifting. I love the positive energy that flows in your poems. The thought of destiny is in equal measures alluring and daunting. You’ve managed to bring it out in a delicate and meaningful manner. A big congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 6:44:00 PM

    Thanks for the great compliment re:Su's contest, I wanted a sonnet so I just babbled out a 14 word love message and used each word as the beginning of the lines..you try! Light & Love Cher!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Big Congratulations Tom!!! Gripping!! Well Done! Big huggs, Deb

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 1/26/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tim, Tom, Tyson...don't matter!...Hey, wait a sec!...I kinda like Tyson!...from now on, I insist that you call me by that name!...Thanks so much for the kind comment Deborah and more thanks for befriending me on facebook...
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch Date: 1/26/2013 5:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dang it!! I hate this auto correct!! Tim Tim Tim!!! Now that's what I intended to write your name Tim not Tom!! Lol. ??
  1. Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM

    Tim...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 3:03:00 PM

    Way to go Tim, congrats

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:22:00 PM

    Amazing! Congratulations on your Ist Place win, Tim! Annalise

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 1:50:00 PM

    This i think is my favorite one so far. BIG congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 11:27:00 AM

    This reads like the classics I would find in my treasured collection. A lovely sijo Tim!! My congratulations!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:28:00 PM

    You best not get the raptures of the deep Cher...stay away from the ocean![ a 7!] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:29:00 AM

    amazing poetry Tim...

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Yes, a very well executed, deep and dark Sijo. This reads like a winner to me. Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 11:57:00 PM

    wow, this is dark and eerie, and I LIKES!

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:43:00 PM

    Hola, Tim, stopping by to say and read a few of your poems... I like the poem it is dreamy and then it is not... kind of confusing, right! Well, I find the waiting kind of exhausting, but worth waiting for. I like the image in which you gave Mother a Daughter... lovely... always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:12:00 PM

    This gives me a longing to be there...though in reality I'd not go lol Such lovely words you've written to convey a love of the sea....

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:40:00 PM

    love this atmospheric write, Tim - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:14:00 PM

    Ahh!!..This one is excellent poetic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:26:00 PM

    wowser a great one you are diffinitely blooming! Keep them coming Cher. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:15:00 PM

    Absolutely brilliant! Thank you,

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:03:00 AM

    This is sensational. I love the last line the most. Great write, and I wish you luck in the contest- although I expect to see it on the winners list :) have a Sunday as beautiful as your poem!

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Sijo is an unknown form to me - I love this poem anyway:-) .... 'Ubuntu' can indeed become the war cry of more people: "How can I be happy, if all the others are sad" (per my blog with the same name: Ubuntu). Wishing you a peaceful Sunday, Tim. :-)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:48:00 PM

    nicely penned Tim....

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:30:00 PM

    Very deep and thoughtful poem Tim. - Good luck in the contest. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)