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Many Unhappy Returns

It’s a work day
And it’s my Birthday
All the fours
Male menopause
A Grade - A
Gray Day
Life’s not designed
To be kind
Never mind – eh!

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Hi David, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:36:00 AM

    Bummer! Not even a piece of cake? Enjoyed. daver

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:58:00 AM

    Nice poem.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:59:00 PM

    about your poem: he he.... yes returns... never understand them... PD

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:35:00 PM

    David, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:09:00 AM

    David a big welcome to the soup, I like this poem of yours...David