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Me Versus 4th Grader - part 2

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Me Versus 4th Grader - part 2

Bed Time Story

Day already low --------------------------> Hazelle
Standing owl coo, coo in time ---------> Me
Waiting for a tale-------------------------> Hendrickson

Sun

Huge ball of fire ---------------------------> Hendrickson
It gives us light, heat and warmth ----> Hazelle
The window of bliss ----------------------> Me


Author's Note:
This is another haiku which I and my twins students made, they were really excited when doing these haikus :)

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  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:28:00 PM
    Hello Yanny, the haiku pairing sounds like fun... Love this... xox~PD

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 2/6/2013 4:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Linda, thank you for your visit, and glad that you like it :D - hug, yanny
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:21:00 AM
    Wonderful that you are passing you love of words and ideas to your young students.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 1/13/2013 4:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard :) I the one who should thanked you for making such an inspiring poem, and its really an honor for me :D, wishing you a warm sunshine :D
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Have a wonderful day Yanny, thanks again for the terzanelle.