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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Exquisite religion, my imagination is aflame on your alter of wilderness Christine - I hunt to taste soul such as yours, I have nourishment for the night - thank you - your temple is warm and brite - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Wot can I say about this poem that I haven't already mentioned to you? The structure, rhyme and flow is absolutely stunning. This is an example of metrical, rhyming free verse at its best....the very definition of free verse: form that transcends the boundaries of other strict forms; but creates its own form. Yeah, this is disciplined free verse which incorporates a lot of poetic devices. Rhymers who are anti-free verse, or supposed free versers who actually write gobbly-gook prose, could learn a lesson here :D The first time I read this poem, I was very impressed. I love it -- an instant favourite of mine!