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Do You Remember

Do you remember the creek you and I meandered with. . . those many years ago? Its half-forgotten end has now run dry and vanished like the ferns that used to grow along the border of the glade we two had happily discovered, claimed as ours, and even then, I guess we somehow knew that time was fleet; we picked sweet wild flowers, made friendship garlands. Sunny daffodils were blooms you liked the best. I liked the blue. And then we raced each other up small hills, lay laughing in green grass, friends ever true! Too old for running now, I spread a blanket and weave yellow rings, remembering my friend.

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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Andrea' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:50:00 PM

    Wonderful write. Congrats on your win. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:17:00 AM

    perfect reminder of my childhood.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:03:00 PM

    ..lovely Andrea my sweet poetess... may the sun shines you my warmest hug,, each line of yours is a feast to my eyes and a golden craved to my heart... appreciate much our friendship <3 <3 <3

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 6:32:00 AM

    great write.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:40:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Sorry this is so late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:36:00 AM

    sorry i am late with congratulations Andy , very unintentional, life and strife grabbed me by the throat but okay now lo,l xx

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 2:32:00 PM

    Memories, like the corners of my mind. :) Couldn't resist. :) This is beautiful Andrea. Just loved going down memory meadow with you. Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 6:20:00 AM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:37:00 PM

    Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:05:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea ....Seren

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 1:29:00 PM

    An exceptional sonnet with marvelous flow, rhyming and enjambment! Lovely imagery too. Congratulations on your win!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 11:10:00 AM

    congrats on ur win Andrea....:))

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 10:14:00 AM

    so nice to remember those happy moments with friend...I Congratulations friend Andrea on your win...cheers!! Hugs always, Maria

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Congrats Andrea... xx

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 8:21:00 AM

    Andrea ~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:48:00 AM

    I was glad to see this one on the list... it's so beautiful. congratulations!!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 7:16:00 AM

    Congratulations, my friend! I knew this would be a winner! :)

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 6:46:00 AM

    A beautiful sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Su

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Very touching. :)

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Such a beautiful poem Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:46:00 PM

    This is such a sweet tribute to a dear friend. Very beautifully written.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:06:00 PM

    lovely tribute to friendship, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Ahh yes, Andrea...don't know if you're talking about male or female here, but this sure reminds me of by-gone days and my first crush...reads like a winner! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Ahh!!Friendship that last a lifetime..Beautiful work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:52:00 PM

    thats beautiful, reminded me of Barbie and I when we were kids. sent you soup mail asking a wee favor

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:11:00 PM

    beautiful memories Andrea.....wonderful write....love....Joseph

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:57:00 PM

    Really well conveyed in the lines, the fading of occasions & memory; also showing the eternal quality of desire, to remain constant, in friendship and the fact that others will enjoy the same things, places, and not know of our times there.." Good job Andrea..)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:57:00 PM

    Its lovely to come back and read a poem from one of my favourite poets x

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