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OH SO CLEAR

Oh so clear almost transparent
No more mist foggy dense
Knowing now much aware
Every step walked unsteady
Mirror fragile easy cracked.

Sensitive heart pumping slow
Fighting hard goddess observed
Facial expression never reveals
Every line a story unfolds
Pure genuine can't you see

Clarity that's newly found
Empathy surrounds her being 
Emotions thoughts of others
Awakening eyes opened wide
Lucid dreams having had are clear.

Dawn Mclaughlin @Dawn2013

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  1. Date: 1/17/2013 3:12:00 PM

    ‡ One Thing Beyound A Doubt Which Is Absolutely Clear, My Sweet Beautiful Precious Dawn, Unto Myself As Everyone Else ˜ The Captivating Splendours In Both Your Loving Heart, As Your Beautiful Eyes ˜ Here, Your Beauty Brushes The Radiance Glowing Bright In Measures Unbound Amid, Anothers Loving Heart ˜ Thank You For Your Wonderful And Joyous Visit; 'Beautiful!' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *