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Below is the poem entitled SUCH SHOULD BE THE COLOR OF REAL DREAMS which was written by poet Andrew Crisci. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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On a serene Autumn night when the waning moon
hangs in the middle of the murky sky, 
it seems a huge yellow balloon;
stardust falls as pollen from flowers around the pound,
and it doesn't pelt as rain, but make a cascading sound...
every shadow vanishes along with the owls' cry.

Bedazzled, I hold out my anxious hands to catch that shower of light gold,
and it falls gently as transparent raindrops bouncing only once,
then settling as sand after a whirlwind lasting the briefest second;
so heavy it becomes, that I let some escape without reluctance:
spreading it on the leaves of the scented spruces that attract moonbeams...
a thought comes to me, " Such should be the color of real dreams!

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:10:00 AM
    Yes it is true ....... strange to think that everyone in the world looking at the same moon. - And think how many poems it is written about: The moon ...... A very enjoyable poem Andrew. - oxox //Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery !! I like how you finished this poem adding the owl's cry.

    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres
    Date: 1/11/2013 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love the second verse as well...