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Nothing Left

That awful moment it time
When you realize
You have nothing left to give
Nothing with which to charm
You’ve said all you can say
And played your last card
And there is nothing….
Nothing left
But the aching of your heart!

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Did you mean "that awful moment in time."? Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:39:00 AM

    This “aching of your heart!” is the source of your next deposit in the bank of poetry! So, a lot are left and not nothing! Wonderful writing again. By the way were did you learn “ Katapliktikos?” Thank you!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/13/2013 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey!!!! I lived in Kypros for 17 years and am Cypriot now! ;) I love the place! Thanks for the lovely posts. I loved the last one on Friend of Wisdom! The ending line blew me away! Philakia!
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:00:00 PM

    sad write,the place called nothingness,I have the remedy for this feeling Eileen,check out my poem Feel the Power

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/12/2013 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard! Will do! :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:23:00 AM

    What a sad poem, Eileen! Hope this is not autobiographical my friend! Well written... love, Jack

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/12/2013 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Jack! It's so good to hear from you! Life has its ups and downs! We use them all to write what comes from the heart! Hugs!
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:57:00 AM

    So sad, Eileen .... - But a very good poem. - I hope it's just fantasy. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/12/2013 6:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Anne Lise. Love hearing from you. We write from experience often times. :(
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:29:00 PM

    That is a sad day's realization..I hope not at any time in your life but just a topic about which you have written..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/12/2013 5:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate the spirituality that comes through your words, Sara. God bless!
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 11:33:00 AM

    Hi Eileen hope this is just a write and not true loved it though, all the best Owen

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 1/12/2013 5:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Owen. Always good to hear from you!