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A REVELATION

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Below is the poem entitled A REVELATION which was written by poet Brian Strand. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A REVELATION

The
door
            was
            open
I
wandered
                    in
amazed
silence
             solitude
alone
with
               my
               thoughts
He
spoke
                then
                sat
listening
                we
                dined
He
became
               a
               friend
I
became
               as
                a
child


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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:44:00 PM
    I really really liked the message.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:54:00 AM
    This is excellent !! To become the child of the Master Teacher... love when HE visits me. Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Fantastic write, Brian! I love this! This one's going in my favs. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:16:00 AM
    BEHOLD I STAND AT THE DOOR AND KNOCK IF ANYONE HEARS MY VOICE AND OPENS THE DOOR I WILL COME IN AND DINE WITH HIM AND HE WITH ME XXX EXQUISITE LIKE YOU XXX

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 8:14:00 AM
    Hi Brian long time since we connected. Always enjoy your poetry. Back in the city and hopefully back more at the soup. Kids moved down here so now I will not have to travel each week. love phyl