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Taken

Things are going to plan
The timer is set, all is going well
The scene is set no one about
This plan is working swell.

Just time to get ready
Get things just right
The moon is up, the stars are out
This is going to be my night...

Wine is poured the timer goes
A knock comes at the door
Not expecting anyone
I wonder what they are knocking for...

Quickly I deal with the timer
The door bell then suddenly rings
I don’t want the company 
I am doing other things...

It is friends, they just walk in
I am frustrated and I am now shaken 
My night of indulgence is now over
As my new baked sausage rolls are taken

© 11/01/2013

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Mandy, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:50:00 PM
    UT oh..you love sausage poems..I think I have one somewhere BRB Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 1/22/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes title Luscious Piece
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Excellent write giving me excellent smiles my dearest friend, Mandy! My biggest hug for your fantastic win! You're one of my favs! Thank you so much for your visit, your congratulatory and inspiring comments on my poems. I am so sorry if the expression of gratitude comes only now. Million thanks for everything! Good luck and best wishes always! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Mandy :D - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Mandy, congrats on your win with this humorous poem! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Hmm!I think I will like to take your sausage rolls as well.Wonderful presentation,Nice write,Mandy...Good to see you at the winners circle..Thumb up for you,my good friend...

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:55:00 PM
    well done Mandy...Seren

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:34:00 PM
    congrats you are up with the winners again,,, i like this poem...

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:43:00 AM
    congrats on your win Mandy

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:46:00 PM
    They were yummy Mandy, finger licking good as Kernel Sandlers would say, lol xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thought it would be you lol xx
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Cute write, Mandy! Love, Kim

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Kim xx
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 6:49:00 AM
    yes here i am captivated, forgetting about your wicked last line poems,, had a good old laugh,, good poem love this

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/11/2013 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks harry, glad you like it xx