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Where Was He

In a tiny Kingdom, in some far, distant land,

lived 9 hundred subjects, whose ruler was "The Shan"!

With a horrendous temper and prone to take fits,

his subjects walked on eggs, keeping their wits!

For some time, no problem, and it was great,

then a sudden fit, led to a perilous fate!

Now everyone was affected, except for one little man!

I just can't tell you, in fact nobody can,

his exact location, when "The fit hit the Shan"!


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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Very funny, Ralph! Belated congratulations on your win! Ruben.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:58:00 PM

    this is cute!! and which contest was this for??

    TAYLOR Avatar RALPH TAYLOR Date: 1/23/2013 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea. The contest was called "9"!
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:53:00 AM

    Congrats on your BIG win friend Ralph..awesome write indeed! Cheers!! Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:44:00 AM

    Congratz on your great win Ralph :)

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your top spot Ralph xx

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Ralph , :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice nice nine lines in Tracie's :-) " #9 " awesome contest... love always ~PD

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win my dear Ralph! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:58:00 PM

    hahaha Ralph very clever and cute! love,Deb