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Initiation

three pensee

Break room
boss’s nephew  -
You’re using  my favorite mug.
I’m sorry, it wasn’t labeled.
(I lie, his cup, my eye.)

Garage
boss’s nephew -
Your car’s in my uncle’s spot. 
How was I to know which was his?
(I cough,  the prig,  buzz  off.)

Taken
I’ve just been had.
Boss’s nephew takes care of
my welcome to the factory.
(I smile!  Just wait awhile.)

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Reason, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Your entry was quite unique. I really like this one. Congrats, lady!

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:51:00 PM

    I'm not familiar with this form, but it looks interesting. Congrats on your win, Reason! Love, Kim

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 1/21/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The pensee is a 5-line , non-rhyming poetic form depicting a thought or reflection written in such manner: 2/4/7/8/6/syl counts… Subject (2 syllables) Description of Subject (4 syllables) Action (7 syllables) Setting (8 syllables) Final Thought (6 syllables)
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 12:26:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win!