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The Hill

When thoughts overwhelm me,
I run to you
where I can be free

next to the sea
under a forest canopy
where nature surrounds
I found you

When I stumbled across you,
many months ago,
things were calm, collected, serene
time stood still
			so did my mind

things change
I never thought you would
your leaves have fallen,
			the air chilled
					your green gone dead

the universe is strange
in changing you
when all I needed
was
	consistency

					but even nature changes, I suppose

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:54:00 PM

    Abbie, about your poem: life is like a hill... never know what to expect or how fast we run without stumbling... enjoyed...pd

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Abbie, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 5:23:00 PM

    Welcome to soup, I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:10:00 PM

    second read, captured the story told,welcome to the soup, hope other offerings to come,good luck.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Changes with every season. Good poem. I like - JH