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Liquidity

Time becomes liquid when I’m with U
an endless torrent, rushing river & I imbibe it greedily
sucking down hours like minutes.

It runs down our bodies & 
sizzles our words 
Like pungent hot oil. 

It runs
Like mercury
smooth & easy
until it lands heavy in my conscience
a finite measure of our infinite joy.

Becomes wet concrete, slowing
Wishes  words  actions    thoughts       dreams

Solidifies into
duties, alarm clocks, books, responsibilities.

It hardens.
Creating the path that I tread upon, dragging my feet 
until it again becomes

A liquid endless torrent . . . rushing river

when I’m with U.

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Mari, stopping by to read this poem again... I like the way you laid the watery image of melting by his side as time passes by... sometimes love can take so much away,,, greediness always steps in and wants more.... maybe we need to build a dam for the gushing river.... love this.... one again....PD

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 5:56:00 PM

    congrats Mari ....Seren

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Congrats! ~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 6:27:00 PM

    Mari,. ;-) Congratulations with your lovely poem. In Mystic Rose' "Be My Valentine" contest. Always~ PD

    Roberts Avatar Mari Roberts Date: 1/14/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your support and thanks for taking the time to read it. It means a lot to me to be able to share my scribbles in such a warm environment.
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Yup I'm with Anne amazing! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Amazingly stunning write, I love it. Well done and congrats :)

    Roberts Avatar Mari Roberts Date: 1/14/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your words are TOO kind but I love to hear them! Thanks!:O)
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Congrats Mari on your placement and thank you for joining my contest xxx

    Roberts Avatar Mari Roberts Date: 1/14/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure MR, Thanks for having it! It was scary but fun! lol
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:21:00 AM

    Fantastic Mari--what you say the way it's written and the emotions within--love it!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:16:00 PM

    LIke the anology between romance and changeable aspects of elements,enjoyed and thanks for sharing.

    Roberts Avatar Mari Roberts Date: 1/14/2013 6:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yay! Im glad it made sense to you. Thanks Robert!