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Eligible Bachelor

Enthusiastic he is

Loves your say

Insouciant he is 

Gifts you away

Inspiring he is 

Buck-up he says

Legit he is

Engrosses your days

 

Beloved he is

Admires you in a way

Charismatic he is

Habituates your lay

Efficient he is 

Leads your way

Opposite he is 

Retains your nee 

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Pranab Jyoti Rava, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:40:00 PM

    LIKE this precise and neat form of expression, welcome to the soup, spread your wings.

    Rava Avatar Pranab Jyoti Rava Date: 1/11/2013 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind words.. :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup! Pleasant with the "new poets", you write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Have a enjoyable day - Love from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rava Avatar Pranab Jyoti Rava Date: 1/10/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks...This P-Soup is really a good forum for raw talent..:)