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  1. Date: 1/24/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Eeeeeeek... first of all... I HATE hospitals! This aroused some bad memories! I felt like I was right there in the hospital when reading this poem, it really pulled me in and kept me so engaged. Very well done- except- now I have yucky hospitals on my mind! Haha

    Ingham Avatar Arianna Ingham
    Date: 1/24/2013 3:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hahaha well, that was the effect I was going for. I was just released from the hospital the day after I wrote this and I was not feeling very well.