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Violet Shades

My heart still beats for you
the tender beat of love that's true.
Knowing, that you think I'm fat
(I think I'm fat too...)
and you no longer care for me.
I still cry over losing you...

I know I'm not some beauty queen,
I'm not worthy of your love anymore...
I know that too.
Still...my only love...
I cry over losing you.

Please don't bring up my shortcomings,
no one knows them better than me.
I miss you like crazy.

It's easy to see...
without you, I don't care about me....

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  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:31:00 AM

    Very sad, and I know so many people can relate to this. Why is it we continue to love someone who makes us feel unlovable. I do love this poem Catie, but it's sad.

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 1:34:00 PM

    Ok it's my turn to shake.you probably picked him for His looks too. Wait he'll age.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:03:00 PM

    I feel like shaking you!!! I have low self esteem myself and reading this it makes me angry for the reasons it exists..for both of us. There is no doubt in my mind you are beautiful in every way Catie! This person is not good enough for you! Do not change your body for anyone but yourself, and be proud of you and the loving heart and amazing talent you have. Sending you encouraging and warm hugs, dear friend. xoxoxo

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 1/22/2013 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Sharon! Sooo nice to hear from you. I am not writing much these days, but every once in a while i do try to come up with something. Love and hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:37:00 AM

    Dam anyone who makes you think you shouldn't care about you without them. Listen sis you are a star, and never you forget that. If someone don't want to walk in your radiance then they were never meant to be there in the first place. Love you much. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Hey Catie, you can always lose a little weight, and you'll always have your poetry, seems like a win-win situation to me, well wishes Joe..)

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 7:16:00 PM

    what am i suppose to say?

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:50:00 AM

    Hi Catie love your poem,, a message here i think...

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:54:00 AM

    Awwwww Catie, you couldn't ever be fat. I enjoyed the visit. Look at my time. Just cant sleep tonight.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:13:00 PM

    ‡ I Don't Know, You Look Absolutely Gorgeous Within Your Beautiful Blogs Photo, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Catie ˜ This Must Be Fiction And Only Its Penetrating In Compassions Emphatic Heart Bears The Afores Truth Of Yesss, You Are Sooo Gifted ˜ I Fell In Love With Your Beautiful Poetry, The Very First Time I Felt Your Words Swirling Inside My Heart ˜ Your Beauty's Love Poetry Is Beyound Compare; Treasures And Jewels And Everything Lovely ˜ Sweet Kisses, Dipped In Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 7:43:00 PM

    This breaks my heart...though I've seen it many times happen to others. My thought is... He never loved this person...and probably has no idea what TRUE LOVE is. You wrote these words very well...but never let someone define you !!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:02:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your work! This is a gem! --------Lori

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:01:00 PM

    awww Catie-Did..It's as if they were not fat/had pec's to match their boast/it's as if they had their hair/and had larger weenie roasts!/men! what can one say/what will they say to be free/ they're heartless that's the key! Love Ya Gal