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Surrender

In a moment of weakest surrender
 I relinquished mine heart to thee
for nothing less doth love demand!
Its nectar sweetness draweth me 
What a strange effect on mine heart
For love hath over ruled mine senses
and left me defenseless.
I am without one plea for I am at 
Its mercy



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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:45:00 AM

    I know mastery of verse when it touches mine heart and swathes mine soul.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 5:29:00 PM

    ‡ 'Surrender.' Yesss, Someone's Heart Is Leaping Through Loops Of Pure Joy, Sweet Beautiful Lori ˜ My Spirit Sways Unto The Music Amid Their Merriment ˜ Your Love Is Beautiful, As Is Your Mesmerizing Verse; Truly ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

    Lucas McClure Avatar Lori Lucas McClure Date: 1/9/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your kind words. I greatly appreciate your reading my poems ------Lori