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Perfect Water Lair

The air is wet, the sky is very grey A buoy works its shift down near the shore Light is quite scarce in these clouds by the bay Might be a little rain, clouds to implore The waves are more brisk down on the surface There might be a flash of lightning no more There’s nothing between the water and grace A constant wind exists out in the air There’s a tender, calm feeling in this place Never will one find terror or despair On this ocean a perfect water lair
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:58:00 PM

    You deliver peace with every thought and breath Russell I lcan lose myself in this, xxx

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:31:00 AM

    This is good. It sounds like the perfect place to be. Thanks for sharing, also for going through all three of my poems and for calling me a friend. God bless you always. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:20:00 AM

    I can feel the peacefulness of it. Awesome job, Russell:).

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Peaceful and serene....a lovely poem, Russell. And thank you kindly for my placement in your doditso contest....I am honored!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 5:25:00 AM

    This is extremely a fascinating write my dear friend, Russell! I love it so much and so with the lovely form. Thank you so much for sharing, for my awesome win in your latest contest (it's my great honor and pleasure) and all your supports in my poems, contests and everything! More graces and love to you always! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 2:46:00 AM

    Russel, you are a powerhouse of creativity and originality. thank you for this awesome terza.. I wrote to the Team asking them about nette's contact, they said they can't give any personal info meaning her contact no.. so tell me what to do..I will tell them to get in touch with her..if they can that is..

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:14:00 PM

    great stuff Russell and thanks for my wife's first place win. she is so happy and Positano is as beautiful as she wrote it. she is not out of the woods yet but may be released this weekend from hospital if she passes her nutrition tests. she misses you and everyone. Ron

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:35:00 PM

    We are recieving a lot of rain right now...grey clouds, thunder, lake in the yard is my lair lol Enjoyed your poem !!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:17:00 PM

    Hello my friend, really enjoyed this write about the ocean, very descriptive. Rollo

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:17:00 PM

    Awesome write!! ---Lori

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:38:00 PM

    How creative of you Russell to turn a grey scene into something tender and calm. I just love this, very inspirational my friend. Wishing you a beautiful day. Hugs and luv, Gail