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Husband and Wife

Husband and Wife

Heated
Uncontrollable 
Sensation 
Bursting
Abrupt overly 
Nudity highlighted
Distinctively breasted,

Accented atom's
Nature's beauty
Deliciously delighted In A

Whine  (Dance)
Intensely, seductively to 
For tae it's
Eternal light, of happiness, as 
one...

Carma Reed
01-09-13

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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 1:23:00 PM

    Nice work on husband and wife. Last line is essence "as one". Thanks a lot for your visit to my page. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:57:00 PM

    Hello Caram, one day I will be a wife again...but, this time I'm taking notes of the images you posted above... good one my dear BFF..pd

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 3/29/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always glad to have the notion, to lend a helping hand, my dear love you always bff
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Witty.piece of work. You amaze me every time Fam. Love your spirit and presence poet!

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 3/29/2013 7:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Deeply appreciative, my dear scribe hugs soup fam
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 12:04:00 PM

    Beautifully written Acrostic poem here Carma...excellent piece and choice of words..it flows smoothly!!

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 3/29/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks always super ink, soup fam til the end hugs
  1. Date: 1/9/2013 7:34:00 AM

    dear Carma... nice to see you here in soup,,, luv your beautiful work,,, enjoyed is very much my dear poetess :) Luv and hugs <3 <3 <3

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 3/29/2013 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My sweet suki, glad I could give you pleasure, in the read always my love