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Thick And Heavy


                       The fog lies like a thick blanket over my city
                         It is gray, damp and heavy to breathe in
                         Grey and wet ..... gives me a headache
                     Morning turns to night, without any difference
                         I have to get the light and the sun back
                                 Neither cat or dog will go out
                                  I've heard about rain dance
                           Now I would like to take a sun dance
                              Will you join with me in my dance





09.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 6/3/2013 1:37:00 PM
    oh, this one lifts my soul, anne..., such an uplifting verse... you took a wonderful theme and made your words sing!... well done!..:) huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 6/3/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/14/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Annalise, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/15/2013 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, LINDA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Coming from a Gothic standpoint, ide say that this is a really good poem! :) Since becoming more optimistic with myself this is the exact kind of poem I need in my day :D!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:58:00 PM
    How sweet, Anne Lise...I'd love to sun dance with you. I lived on the island of Cyprus where sun dancing was as easy as can be! You are a ray of sunshine to my soul. Thanks for your last post and encouragement! God bless!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/1/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    .... we women have to stand together .... lol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 8:57:00 PM
    I come from a place where the sun shines far too bright much of the time. Maybe we can trade? I really like the way you format most of your writing - centered and symmetrical. Being a visual person, the form, as well as the writing, has meaning for me. Keep up the good work! Jack

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/20/2013 3:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Great write, you have captured the essence of a climate that surrounds us most of the time. Could it be that you are a British Colombian ?:( /:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2013 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - (?) - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, William . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2013 11:49:00 PM
    Hi Anne - Lise, how are you? Love the poem ;} have a blessed day xoxo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2013 2:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Debbie . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Oh,I'll be right there with ya! I hate those dark days that fade into night....oxox f.e.f. :o)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/15/2013 1:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Dan. - -xoxo / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:12:00 AM
    what a lovely uplifting write - a sun dance : )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/14/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Jack. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 2:21:00 PM
    A joyful dance should most shurely bring out the sun I'll join in. Huggs TLee

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/13/2013 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Terry. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:54:00 AM
    hi Anne, doesn't sound great but better days can only be ahead. the sun which shines within is still shining brightly I see.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/13/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Someone must be dancing here, the sun is shining brightly today.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was Bob. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Winter indeed ,not much fun for some. A very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:05:00 AM
    The story of winter. I like an occasional fog, but am always glad when spring hits. Many thanks for your kind comments.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:05:00 AM
    Thanks for your comments on my poetry Anne.. A great description of the weather and also that any weather in life can be made more cheerful if we do what we want to regardless of whatever circumstances:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sadaf. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:32:00 PM
    I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:09:00 PM
    My weather in Oregon State USA is a lot like yours this time of year... nice write Anne Lise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/11/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It gives me a headache...... Thank you for shining on my little poem, Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:50:00 AM
    This is an awesome poem, so lovely one that I feel like joining you in the dance my dear friend Anne-Lise to get back the light and the sun back. Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing, for your visits, supports, inspirations and everything. Big sweet hugs for you! love always, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/11/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Big hug back to you my friend Leonora, thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 6:51:00 PM
    this is a bright and cheerful poem at the end of it, for a grey foggy day!! Me likes!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/11/2013 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, I is pleased when the sun shines and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Continuous gray days can become heavy and depressing..Enjoyed your expression of this idea..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/11/2013 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, I will be happy when the sun is shining and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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