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Below is the poem entitled Mind control which was written by poet Wade Appelgryn. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Mind control

Your formidable beauty controls my eyes,
As I try to stare straight through you,
Just seems impossible because I'm distracted by 
your gorgeous brown eyes and your amazingly 
different smile,
There's more to you than your beauty,
I felt it when I felt your life changing kiss,
Felt my soul being sucked away,
Making me weak so you can control my mind,
Just so I can be inlove with you,
I released myself from that piercing kiss like 
cupid's arrow,
I was hoping to feel different,
Your mind control has got a lock on me now,
I want to be free.

You had full control over me,
You kept my heart beating,
You controlled every thought pattern I had because 
it was always about you,
My mind was about you,
My heart beats when I'm around you,
My lungs gasp when I see you,
Let me free!
Let me go,
I don't want to be controlled by you anymore.

I ran away to be free,
But I couldn't understand why I felt so empty,
I felt so lost,
Could you control me from this far?
Maybe I am free and you never had control over 
me,
Maybe I was wrong after all this time,
I think I'm inlove with you.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2014 10:26:00 AM
    WOW, it's been over a year, since I first left a sweet welcome to the soup... Thank you for being that poet, who became a true friend.... Control, seems to get the best of us... Enjoyed this again.. Linda

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Hello Wade, , stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here picking up and finding new poets to love, appreciate and adore. Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward into following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn
    Date: 1/23/2013 4:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hey there thank you so much, its nice to meet you. I will keep that in mind! take care Linda :) aka PD ;)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Controlling people are really dangerous. Never love someone who tries to control your mind seek God seek help! I have been there I know what that feels like...

    Appelgryn Avatar Wade Appelgryn
    Date: 1/23/2013 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks hey will take that advice