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The Vacancy

Slowly my world shatters
Unravelling all around me
Inside my heart is 
Cold, empty, broken
I have fallen apart completely
Drowning in the waves of sorrow
Everything I once was is swept away

By Morgan Mise
Written November 13, 2012

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 4:21:00 PM

    I know the feeling. Good poem - JH

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:53:00 PM

    Great acrostic poem... It would be tragic should something foolish take such talent from us.... Stay and let us show you love...Jake

    Mise Avatar Morgan Mise Date: 1/8/2013 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm staying :) thanks Jake. Morgan.
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:19:00 PM

    I agree, the fuel for writing often comes from our darkest moments in life. If you think about doing it, that's fine, but if you do it, I'm afraid I'll have to kick your butt. (lol) Life is too precious to end before it's time my friend. Always hang in there, and write it all out.

    Mise Avatar Morgan Mise Date: 1/8/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha I wont. It was a month ago or so and I'm doing better. And agree, life is too precious.
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:49:00 PM

    ‡ In My Minds Eye, Sweet Beautiful Precious Morgan, I Find Your Lovely Beauty Lying Atop Virgin White Silk Sheets ˜ And The World Is Beautiful And You Are Beautiful And Everything Is Perfect ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Mise Avatar Morgan Mise Date: 1/8/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel. That's very sweet of you. :) Love from Morgan
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Sometimes our world feels like this, but it will get better. I've been the lowest of low and can relate to this poem. Good write.

    Mise Avatar Morgan Mise Date: 1/8/2013 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I agree completely. Our darkest and happiest feelings can fuel life to our writing. And Thanks.