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The Sin of Age

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The Sin of Age

I once knew a boy,
Who turned weeds into trees,
Who turned houses into castles,
And took magic from the breeze,
He turned birds into dragons,
And rabbits into soldiers
Our kingdom had no boundaries,
We held pride upon our shoulders,
We could accomplish anything,
We would only need to try,
But then that boy abondoned me,
And left a man behind.

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 11:37:00 PM
    It sounds like that boy was Harry Potter. I like the visual this poem has to offer. Good write - JH

    Dwinnell Avatar Caitlin Dwinnell
    Date: 1/10/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Actually, when I wrote it he was my brother, but I can see how you think that :) thanks!