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VIOLENCE FANTASY

able to control the situation of the hunt,
there's no end to the possibilities.
ranging from vehicles to any guns,
arsenal fantasy so unlimited.
underrated version of what the violence means,
mental consequences not truly seen.
deranged activities at first is enticing;
misplaced content of excitement,
hours passing by with unlimited possibility of different kills,
no pressures from serious authorities.
enjoyment of the thrill:
exploitation of the fun,
going beyond your imagination,
meaningless aggression that doesn't stop.
unworthy replacement for having too little to do!!!

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Hi Donn, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win friend Donn. Cheers!!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on a deserving win, Donn! Annalise

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:36:00 AM

    Well said, congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 7:14:00 AM

    So very true! Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 3:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Donn xx

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:55:00 AM

    congratulations on your win..

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:21:00 AM

    i like the last part"unworthy replacement for having too little to do"