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Only Everything - Part Two

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Below is the poem entitled Only Everything - Part Two which was written by poet Aaron Guttery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Only Everything - Part Two

I got an ultimatum, I can shoot through them or create a diversion,
but  either way it's the same, just an unreleased version.
It's never different, one just brings a smile, 
I accept the little things, one step is the beginning of a mile.

Never denial, there's no regrets and no looking back,
what happened then is gone, a figment of your imagination, it's the past.
You brought that out, you let me release my inner thoughts,
you brought my chin up, and when I fell you instantly caught.

When it was hot, you were a fan, a resource for fresh air,
when nothing was right, you were the only place where things were fair.
My fairytale, my mansion where there were to many rooms,
where I could take of my shoes, and finally tell the truth.

You're my destination, it doesn't matter how far,
my fabrication, where I can build anything that I want.
I can't replace you, there's nothing more that I need.
You are my garden, and my pen is the seed, you're Only Everything.

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:28:00 AM
    Ahh I see now. Whether about God or the solace of writing, either way it reads really well. I'm assuming the reason it's split in two parts is simply because the site only allows 2,500 characters. Shame. For me writing is very therapeutic, and when I get the beginnings of an idea I really can't function properly until I write it down, and as soon as possible.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:57:00 AM
    I've read both parts (and though both are awesome I find the second part to be much more powerful). Your title is really something else... the statement " You're Only Everything" is beyond words to describe... other than to say that there is nothing else that even remotely compares to Him (I'm assuming you're talking about God here). I would really like to see you more around the site, for I believe your work should be more well known!

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    Date: 3/18/2013 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    In Part 1 and 2 of this I was actually talking about writing. And how it's always there for me. God is definitely a big part of this, but this was aimed at how I can just run away into my notebook whenever and it's always there. Thank you for reading and commenting and being a fan!
  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Part one blew me away. Part 2...wow. Incredible thoughts and feelings masterfully penned. You definitely have a way with words. Always, Laura