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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 4:36:00 AM
    Something to do with the rythm, it doesn't rhyme yet seems to some how. Simple nice melike C:

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 5:35:00 AM
    I'm... I'm speechless. I'm also fairly certain I am incapable of creating a mono syllable poem that ends up at all poetic! Well done.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:54:00 PM
    A very romantic piece of art. Beautiful.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:14:00 PM
    now that I know what it was, I can say that you did it in a way that was very natural so by being effortless you made it look easy.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Bee You Tee Full - see, all one syllable! ;-) Did you set out to do that, or did it just start being that way so you finished it off that way? Just curious. Hope all is as well as can be with you and yours. Joe

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Nice !!! Not an easy thing to do. May give it a go...for the contest, time permitting. This is just so stinkin romantic too !! Love it !!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:46:00 AM
    i love this David, so caring so sincere.. no i'll be honest, don't know the answer to your question, is Ruben right? he usually is.....

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 10:18:00 AM
    nice one David xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Yes, Cyndi said it right, it's a poem written using just monosyllables... which is not so easy. Great work, David.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:16:00 AM
    I will go with Dee observation and if she is right perhaps [one and one does not make two, but a new one!] and of course Catie's right too it isn't April yet?Light & Love

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti
    Date: 1/8/2013 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Everywhere (I've been) but the US puts the day/month/year for abbreviated dates.
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Oh my David that is so lovely. brought tears to my eyes.......Seren

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 5:41:00 AM
    Like everyone else, the only thing unusual I see about your poem, is the copyright date. Free verse, three verses, each with their own envoy, no real meter, though the flow is smooth and soft, no rhyme, yet it hold the readers attention with your tender words of love.....gosh, David, it's got to be the copyright date, yeah????? Love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 5:40:00 AM
    Now, this must have been hard to write a piece with just one count per word ;-) Ha just did it but I am not sure I would want to try this, too. Awk, I am caught in a loop. HA HA! ONE ONE ONE

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey
    Date: 1/8/2013 5:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow! I didn't even notice that! WTG Cyndi, very attentive! hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:28:00 PM
    yes, it is simple but beautiful, I don't know about unusual. Hmmm, let me study it. nope, I don't think I will ever figure it out. TELL ME, please.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Very moving beautiful poem, David! Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Hanitra

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:59:00 PM
    This is quite the brilliant and glorious write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful and stupendous poem this afternoon! I loved the way you brought the two of you together, to be forever...I really liked the last line, "Two hearts...One beat...One love..." ingenious! What a wondrous and outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 12:29:00 PM
    It's really wonderful written to your dear wife, hope she L-O-V-E it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)