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About This Poem

Lights On Water

Lights On Water

Lights  adorn lovely night waters,sparkling flecks of diamonds 
Ripples ...at  mercy of  silly  pebbles , or  windy rebuke
Serene beauty ruffled ;what gains ,what pains -left  unaware.

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  1. Ryerson Avatar
    Tim Ryerson
    Date: 1/31/2013 2:57:00 AM
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    'Windy rebuke'...awesome!...Many congratulations Mehnaz... I am so glad to have discovered your poetry - Tim

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 2/1/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Tim, glad you liked it..
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:20:00 AM
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    Very interesting winning work..Very descriptive lines..Congrats..Sara

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Sara for the kind words...
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    Abdul Malik
    Date: 1/27/2013 5:43:00 PM
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    Hey, this is nice work. Congrats.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/28/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Abdul Malik...
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 1/27/2013 1:11:00 AM
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    Awesome Sijo! Congratulations on your super win my dear Mehnaz! love/hugs, Leonora

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Leonara for your kind words...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/26/2013 4:54:00 PM
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    Mehnaz...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks pd
  1. Lamoureux Avatar
    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/26/2013 3:00:00 PM
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    Excellent win!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Richard, was not on PS for some time...
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/26/2013 1:48:00 PM
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    very lovely. Congrats on your win!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 1/26/2013 11:25:00 AM
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    Breathtaking poetry! My congratulations to you!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carrie ...
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    James Fraser
    Date: 1/12/2013 3:14:00 AM
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    Your words allow me to vision beautiful vistas Mehnaz. Good luck in Rick's contest with this gem :)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks James....
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/10/2013 12:12:00 AM
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    If you haven't enter it in Rick's Sijo contest,Go and enter it!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/27/2013 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    kash , thanks .....
    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/10/2013 4:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes Kash , I did.after you said. Thanks a lot..
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/8/2013 8:44:00 PM
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    MEHNAZ, I know I told you how much I love and get your poetry.... even if i do not get the poems...i have fallen in love with the way you write... everything about this poem, is beautiful. i love visualizing diamonds lost on the bottom of the ocean... giving light a reason to sparkle above... glad you are among my favorite poets...love LINDA

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am honored Linda. Thank you for your kind words. Love always, Mehnaz
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2013 9:10:00 AM
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    Very pretty picture!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Richard.
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/8/2013 8:18:00 AM
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    Beautiful!!Should be a winner sure!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil Date: 1/8/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Kash, was not sure enough to enter contest ... Thanks for liking it. :-)


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